50 Respondents General Population
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50 RespondentsGeneral Population
|23 Responses to Option A|
Option A is much more appealing and unique. There are other books/webinars that claim to be able to show you how to get ahead.
I think this is more in-line with my skill set since I'm inexperienced with video.
Seems more individualized, like I'll get more out of it.
The other title sounds like I'm trying to break the rules or take advantage of someone. Choice A wins by default.
I graduated with a degree in business so I know that working to evolve business strategies and make things better for myself is always the better option. I do not want to be concerned with impressing people to get ahead, but instead I want to make sure what I do is to better help me succeed.
B seems generic
I don't love this title but it is certainly better than the overused "Get ahead"
this title involves me personally
The phrase "get ahead" sounds a bit competitive and does not appeal to me.
sounds more interesting
IT MAKES IT SEEMED PERSONALIZED FOR ME
"Make it work for me" sounds more useful and more specific than "get ahead."
option A is more personal
it is more personalized and progressive
I like that is a more unique pitch. The "get ahead" line is stale.
I'm more interested in making things work for me.
Sounds more personalized
I like A better because it specifically says "me." That makes it sound like I can personally "make it" while the other one seems vague and harder for me to do.
I prefer Option A.
Seems more personal
A is personal.
The focus on making business work "for me" specifically is more appealing because it makes the webinar seem geared toward helping me, the reader, specifically. It makes me feel like the webinar is going to be more easily approachable and accessible than others.
|27 Responses to Option B|
Title sounds more educational.
Sounds more exciting
This is more encouraging.
Direct and to the point works better for an email title.
Keep it simple stupid process means shorter is better in this scenario. How to get ahead is also much more positive compared to "How to make it work for me" which has a somewhat negative connotation.
I would rather get ahead than just make it work
This title is more concise.
Simpler and to the point
B - implies the webinar will give me the 'edge'.
both are very generic. B less so.
B sounds more coherent
It's more direct.
sounds more interesting.
It is more motivational
This one sounds better
It makes it seem more like this choice will help me out a lot.
i like b better, because it's certianly more positive. I know i coudld make it but would always prefer to get ahead.
I want to get ahead makes me interested!
I'd rather get ahead.
I would totally download Option B based on the title over Option A.
Everyone wants to get ahead
Option B sounds better.
more informative, seems to fit my needs.
I prefer B because it seems more straightforward.
"How to make it work" isn't very descriptive and is extremely vague.